All your constituents are fragile,
Even your tears and the smile,
You dress your hairs as a work of art,
In the cage of fuzz you dream a heart,
With pleasant soft fingers a comb in love,
Wish in the nest will remain the dove,
And sing for you in all the seasons,
When the tide is over go back sea-sons,
The pearl your power, your wining trump card,
Didn't play cleverly you weren't a wizard,
For the daughter of earth frustrations and fears,
A broken heart and wet eyes in tears,
Like your whole your tears are fragile,
You stood up with a new smile,
Life is full of diamonds and pearls,
Redressed your hairs with lovely new curls,
Son of the sea came back with a tide,
And proposed you to become his bride,
You turned down with a bitter smile,
I was wrong you are not fragile!
Son of the sea came back with a tide, And proposed you to become his bride, You turned down with a bitter smile, I was wrong you are not fragile! ..............lovely write....great
What a Spectacular poem..... Brilliant! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10 on 10
All constituents including smile and hope all things are fragile. Wonderful composition really. Nicely drafted.
A Beautiful poem. I agree with Valsa's comment. If given love and acceptance, she can prove herself, that she is not fragile. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading each lines.
Shakespeare's famous utterance 'Frailty thy name is woman' is often quoted in place and out of place'. Women are often taken to be frail and fragile! But indomitable strength lies in most of the women! If given love and acceptance, she can amaze the world sometimes! Thanks for this acknowledgement Akhtarji! 12
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A beautiful message, in a beautiful poem, for a woman who is mistaken as fragile.................10