I Will Rise Once Again Poem by Akhtar Jawad

I Will Rise Once Again

Rating: 4.9


Sweetheart!
So what,
if you have started ignoring me now,
I know you have billions of lovers on this earth,
and trillions, perhaps more than that,
on uncountable earths like this.
I know you have so many faces,
and you want to improve the beauty of my present face.
I remember I was an ugly insect,
you ignored me so many times,
the pains of your ignoring killed me every time,
but then I took a bath of fire
and got an improved face,
you burned my ugliness,
and made me beautiful.
I know it was my dream that came true.
I am dreaming once again,
ignore me to kill.
Let me take another shower of fire,
I know once again I shall rise
with a lovely face,
You'll love to kiss it.

Friday, April 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 21 April 2017

A wonderful symbolic poem. Thanks

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Bharati Nayak 21 April 2017

Absolutely lovely poem of Divine Love- - Love of God that burns our ugliness- - - makes us beautiful human being- To quote from the poem- - Sweetheart! So what, if you have started ignoring me now, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - the pains of your ignoring killed me every time, but then I took a bath of fire and got an improved face, you burned my ugliness, and made me beautiful. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Goes to My Poem List.

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Rajnish Manga 21 April 2017

Bath & shower of fire will surely mean the burning of all ugliness and rising from the ashes like a phoenix. Great imagery. Thanks.

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Valsa George 22 April 2017

When we burn our ugliness in the fire of penance, we will once again glow with greater radiance! This is what the lent season teaches us! Loved this metaphorical write!

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 April 2017

An improved face! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Anjandev Roy 15 November 2019

Magnificent write. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 January 2019

SIR UR POEMS ARE LIKE A THEUSAURUS WASHED IN MILK AND WRAPPED IN KASHMIR SILK WORDS FRO PARADISE THAT'S ALL WHAT I CAN SEE COME UPON US SHOWER ME WITH ROSE PETALS WHICH HIDE THEE IN YOUR LOVELIEST WORDS OF HARMONY LEND ME A MOMENT OF JOY WILL THEE TO ANOINT MYSELF WITH WORDS THAT BRING SUCH HARMONY A YOUNG POET OF EXPERIENCE HAT I MAY BE TO THEE

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Khalida Bano Ali 31 December 2018

One of the most thoughtful poems of Akhtar Jawad.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 April 2017

Let me take another shower of fire, I know once again I shall rise with a lovely face, You'll love to kiss it. An amazing poem Akhtar Sahab! 100

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Khalida Bano Ali 22 April 2017

great poem...................................................

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