swetha vankayalapati

In Bruises - Poem by swetha vankayalapati

Promises made in haste
slow to take an offence;
Thoughts slur through flowing tears,
pain meanders on passing memories;

Somewhere, the best of thoughts thrown,
sum up, few, from dirts thrown,
some words in my frown,
have hurt you I reckon!


If seeds flow with wings,
in spirits to drink this pain
I'ld have sent them to you...!


If nightmares have souls,
I'ld have warned you
to be cautious, 'I'll hurt you'...! !


If faith has no desires
I'ld have never showered
my love on you...! ! !

If you exist there in pain,
its even in my vein
we are no vain
to show this world
pain exists dear...

let, rest in breathing rivals
I stand infront of my mirror...
in bruises!

Comments about In Bruises by swetha vankayalapati

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (10/7/2013 7:25:00 PM)

    a powerful poem. Love is never saying your sorry. a bruise is difficult to heal. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 137 Points Rigzin Namgyal (9/26/2012 11:14:00 AM)

    ..powerful writing Swetha..it left me in bruises.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Oludipe Oyin Samuel (7/13/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    powerful, mind-reflecting piece. A 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Anele The_african_son Potelwa (umbhali_wasembo) (6/23/2012 1:15:00 AM)

    The thoughts and memory of what has happen, lie upon the days in which look back, of the pain, of the tears, and of what should have been done but was not done, the central tendency of emotions also takes part of the bruise, and then makes sounds of all the thorn and feared moments, Great Reflection as always

    (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Spiritual Seeker (6/22/2012 10:25:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful...the play of words and meanings. excellent read! A great 10. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,719 Points Pheko Motaung (6/20/2012 11:44:00 AM)

    All my life I am pursued by my own self inflicted bruises! And your poem is great and powerful! Yuh's the cute poet of our times (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 436 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (6/17/2012 4:37:00 AM)

    wonderful poem.... it`s full of feelings, emotions and hart reality. it sounds... i like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sharad Juneja (6/17/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    Sorry........ Sorry.....Sorry.......................I would have felt for me if I would have missed this beautiful work of urs............. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 512 Points Vipins Puthooran (6/14/2012 4:31:00 PM)

    'Tis an excellent poem! ! ! !
    Keep up the good work! ! !
    I live in Bruises though//
    Top marks! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (6/14/2012 6:57:00 AM)

    u hv versified an intangible emotion in an excellent manner... i can literally touch the bruises! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Elena Sandu (6/14/2012 12:55:00 AM)

    Misterious air sneaks into my breathe...whoever done any wrong to me forgiven may be. Your poem filled my whole being...feel no more pain. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Darkangel Flyfree (6/13/2012 3:04:00 PM)

    A very good poem indeed. I like the flow of this one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashank Dwivedi (6/13/2012 2:07:00 PM)

    nyc poetry by a nyc poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (6/13/2012 12:01:00 PM)

    Swetha, this poem is very deep I can feel your poem to the core and the message it brings forth. You are an incredible writer, I so enjoy reading your masterpieces. Thank you! Kasia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Joub Kahuria (6/13/2012 11:16:00 AM)

    sorry if i knew i would hurt you or get hurt i would have warned you first. great piece of art well crafted. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,445 Points Unwritten Soul (6/13/2012 10:57:00 AM)

    Hey Swetha, i like this poem...it really original..it's your way in writing..i always notice this style in your poem...and it's good..i like the message as well the flow u bring it here., keep writing_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 13, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 17, 2012

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