When in poverty wallows the multitude
One of sharing should be our attitude
But do not ever count it as our magnitude
For each one is heir to God's plenitude
Do not hoard wealth more than we need
Or merely to satisfy our enormous greed
From our abundance, when the poor we feed
From the clutches of selfishness we'll be freed
When many around us wail in gloom
And perish under poverty's inescapable doom
We are bound to share to help them bloom
Or else God the giver of riches, in anger will fume
Very inspiring indeed scripted with beautiful rhyming words......Valsa.....also there is a great message to all of us ......I really loved it very much.....you deserve 10/10
Wonderful poem with great message for all. Very true said, one should not hoard wealth, one should share the excess...This poem rhymes very well. Loved your write.
great message Valsa, nature's resources are meant to be shared only but forgotten in greed.
If only we could all follow your advice, what a world it would be! You've so eloquently put how we should help others bloom.
God's plenitude is here for each pone and we should keep trust that God will help us at each step. We all should fight against poverty and a lovable society should be developed. God is giver of richness. This is very true. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10
A poem full of wisdom and sound counsel. sharing should be our attitude.
When many around us wail in gloom And perish under poverty's inescapable doom We are bound to share to help them bloom Or else God the giver of riches, in anger will fume.......................................in this selfish world few think in such a way....great write...
wealth Is just a apple to Adam Do not hoard wealth more than we need Or merely to satisfy our enormous greed From our abundance, when the poor we feed
Sharing what is in excess is a humanistic need The giver of riches fuming against the selfish is a fine proposal for Him! A poem that messages to us all.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A great lovely poem with an universal message. When many around us wail in gloom And perish under poverty's inescapable doom We are bound to share to help them bloom Or else God the giver of riches, in anger will fume Very much enjoyed the beauty of rimes.