Deependra Kumar Jha

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Life's little precious moments

Things may change in just a flash,
so live the life on day-to-day
Endure everyday with passion,
as if it's the last turn of your way
Give a meaning to the life,
without holding back in fear
In the moments of happiness,
remember to leave space for a tear

Make plans and set the goal
Always listen to your soul
It's the journey not destination
That provides more gratification
Each day is a little life,
to live, to breathe, to wonder and desire
So don't wait for a special day,
to feel, to celebrate, to ponder and aspire

Life is like a hilly river,
from sinking banks to vanishing currents
Keep your feet firmly on ground,
don't let yourself controlled by the events
Dream big but appreciate smaller things,
make no regrets and harsh comments
In search of a miracle,
don't miss life's little precious moments

Deependra Kumar Jha
Submitted: Sunday, June 28, 2009
Edited: Sunday, June 28, 2009


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  • Seema Chowdhury (7/13/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    excellent work! ! ! very nice and positive.

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  • surya . (7/7/2009 8:07:00 AM)

    follow small rules and live life king size.very good.this para says it all'Life is like a hilly river,
    from sinking banks to vanishing currents
    Keep your feet firmly on ground, '
    voted10
    surya

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  • C. P. Sharma (6/30/2009 11:25:00 PM)

    A blissful poem. It flows as the Ganges from the heavens.
    CP

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  • Kesav Easwaran (6/30/2009 10:14:00 PM)

    'Dream big but appreciate smaller things,
    make no regrets and harsh comments'...

    Great words, Deepen...good poem yours...motivational...i liked...thanks...10

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/30/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    Life is like water.......................so precious! ! !

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  • Priya Arora (6/28/2009 10:33:00 PM)

    Hi!

    My all appreciations for this lovely realistic write..well i do have the same opinion about life..You make your readers feel that they are reading all the more there own point of view..It's a big achievement in it self..All the best :) ..Keep on Sharing such beautiful thoughts..if you can spare some time then do read my collection of poems..hope you'll like that.

    Thanks 'd Regards,

    Priya

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  • Lee Crowell (6/28/2009 1:02:00 PM)

    the message here is universal and well stated by you Deependra

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (6/28/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    meaningful all through.............

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  • Seema Aarella (6/28/2009 7:47:00 AM)

    An inspiring write....a piece of log for the sinking soul, to keep it afloat....! ! ! !
    I liked the last stanza more....very meaningful! ! !

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  • Hanque O (6/28/2009 6:18:00 AM)

    A nicely rhymed and thoughtful poem. An appreciative attitude towards smaller things, precious things, balances the weightier issues, it helps puts things in perspective. Well written.

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