By bragging he could lift even a ton,
Everyone he wanted to stun.
Attempting to lift the weight,
Oops…he lost his gait.
Flat under the load, he moaned, "I am done"
Very funny indeed......Valsa.....It made me laugh under the load.....Subject serious or humorous you are the best
His bragging, trying and ultimately moaning is funny, probably he tried to entertain all of us.
nice, except gait threw me aka 'made me wonder'. one ton? that's all? ? my ice cream spoon [an antique steam shovel] shovels that much into my mouth every second when i really get hungry. bri (:
You have very brilliant thought to express who wants to stunt and lift the weight. When every one falls down this amazes mind. This Limerick is really very fun giving. An amazing sharing is done here...10
Whenever I need a laugh, I can always rely on your limericks! Thanks Valsa.
Lol...Wonderful Limerick Valsa. Something to refresh among the loads of ton.......Loved it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hahaha, a great one, can picture it.