Cassandra Jasmine

Rookie - 54 Points (United States of Awesomeness)

My Friends - Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

My friends here,
Are the shiniest of diamonds,
They are sparkling topazes,
They are priceless gems.

An annoying me,
Yet you all tolerate it.
Like a fresh-mown lawn,
Being dug up by a gofer.

My friends,
You understand me.
You help me,
And I am full of gratitude.

Thank you,
To all of you
Who helped me,
With comments and all,
To becoming a better writer.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I would like to thank the following people who have not only encouraged me with my writing, but also pointed out which places I might lack in:
1) Beach Girl - Fairly generous with comments
2) Goldheart Bird - The dearest sister ever
3) Alookh :) - The brother I never had
4) Alisha Alphonse - Kind, funny, and very, very helpful!
5) Abhishek Kumar - Kind, supportive, and fun to talk to :)
6) And last but not least, Mr. Khairul Ahsan - Whom ever so often comments on my poems, and lets me know where I have done 'nice', or 'not bad'.

Thank you everyone!
Cassandra J.

Comments about My Friends by Cassandra Jasmine

  • Rookie - 100 Points Abdallah Gamal (12/5/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    That was very nice from you.. An amazing write :) (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,433 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/5/2013 11:30:00 PM)

    Wow adorable beautiful friendly poem esp d 1st stanza!
    Do review my latest on masquerade ball. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (10/1/2013 10:50:00 AM)

    Beutiful poem sis! : D Thanks for including me! ! ! ! :))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/30/2013 12:07:00 AM)

    Lovely poem dedicated to your friends..: -)
    not forget this new friend: -P (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,708 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/28/2013 12:33:00 PM)

    The poem is sweet, the poet is sweeter. At such a tender age she writes so well. I have no doubt she will soon carve a niche for herself in the realm of poetry.
    Thanks, dear poet, for mentioning my name. It's always a pleasure to read your poems and also to comment as long as you want them. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013


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