Treasure Island

Cassandra Jasmine

(United States of Awesomeness)

My Mother


Cherry-colored lips;
Always with a kind word there.
Hazel eyes touched up with eye-liner,
So often laughing but holding meaning as well.

My mother,
So kind, so compassionate,
Insisting on my well-being,
And selflessly made sure,
that I had a solid foundation.

At times,
My mother may be intimidating,
and getting on my nerves.
But who could blame her?
I am here to learn from her, not the opposite.

My dear Mother,
How much I love you,
I simply can not say,
But you really should know,
that even all the king's men and horses,
Can never take away my love for you.

Submitted: Thursday, February 27, 2014
Edited: Monday, April 07, 2014

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  • Beach Girl (5/29/2014 4:43:00 PM)

    Oh wow, how did you do that Cassandra? The video with the music was awesome. (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (4/12/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    mothers are the angels from the sky. they are kind of creatures that God has created with care...with lot's of care....
    nice one. (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (4/5/2014 9:02:00 PM)

    first the 'complaint'/suggestion:

    In times,
    My mother may be intimidating,
    and getting on my nerves...............maybe it is because of where i grew up, but i would use At times, not In times.
    ======================
    now for what poets (i think) all like to hear..........................BRAVO! this is really, really good. i am tempted to call it great, but i don't want your head to swell so much you can't get your hat on. i'll send it to MyPoemList now.

    i especially enjoyed:

    But you really should know,
    that even all the king's men and horses,
    Can never take away my love for you.

    very well done, cassie. thanks for sharing. :) bri

    you've inspired me to write of my own mom.

    Bri's Mom

    mom's face was such a sight!
    rightly so, she hid from the light! !
    never a kind word from her lips,
    and her eyes shot bullets from their hips.

    only concerned for herself, never me.
    if i asked for food, she said do you think it's FREE! ?
    she sent me to school, but NOT for education;
    once she sent a note saying keep him longer. it's MY vacation!

    intimidating? yeah, i can see my mom WAS like yours.
    you should have seen how she piled on the chores!
    i learned a lot from being my mom's son,
    none of which was how to, with her, have fun.

    mom, i know i shouldn't say it, but I HATE YOU! i'm your SON.
    if you hadn't abandoned ME, away from you i would have run.
    some day i'll enlist the aid of the king's forces,
    and they'll trample you under the hooves of their horses! !

    so THERE! ! ! !

    i hope this one was funny enough for ya. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (3/4/2014 9:46:00 PM)

    Wow, what a wonderful tribute to your your loving mom!
    'Hazel eyes touched up with eye-liner,
    So often laughing but holding meaning as well.' - Liked these lines very much!
    'But who could blame her?
    I am here to learn from her, not the opposite.' - Smiles....!
    'But you should know,
    that even all the kings men and his horse,
    Can never take away my love for you.' - Your mother would be so proud to hear this!
    I loved this poem, enjoyed its taste fully.10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Noreen Carden (3/3/2014 5:34:00 AM)

    Hey Cassandra what a lovely tribute to your mother.Well done I enjoyed reading your poem (Report) Reply

  • V P Mahur (3/2/2014 1:50:00 PM)

    Dear Cassandra
    so sweet and simple feelings
    mother is always a word to cherish
    Keep it up
    I invite you to read my poems and say something
    Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Shraddha The Poetess (2/27/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    mom is the best.est..............friend in the whole world of a child.............her love for her child is uncountable..and as well as a chil'd love for his mom is also uncountable...it can't be measured.............
    well done.............
    inviting u to read mine.................. (Report) Reply

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