Geetha Jayakumar

Bronze Star - 5,319 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

No more Claims!


A promise of word she keeps,
As she made to you long back dear,

The time had come to put a full stop here.
One path ends here as
The board read the warning sign there.
So now,
No more trespassing will be done,
As she noted it down long back.

No more claim on this path
As it does not belongs to her dear.
This path for her ends here.

With a deep pain she wish to tell,
No more claims further ahead.
Reverting back to her next path thereby,

Wishing you all the best,
on your beautiful come back
To build a dream of castles.
Once again in this beautiful planet dear!

Today nothing is left in her hands,
With an empty hands….
All she can pray for you and tell.....
God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !


Dec 3,2013.

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Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Sunday, December 08, 2013
Edited: Saturday, November 01, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 16,785 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/15/2014 5:44:00 AM)

    Today nothing is left in her hands,
    With an empty hands….
    All she can pray for you and tell.....
    God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !
    A poem giving a message of firm determination. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,997 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/10/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    what is the use of building the dreams of castles in the planet, when one can build a beautiful shrine in their hearts to greet the friends and loved one? and the only path we need is, pure love..
    Anyway thank you for sharing your thoughts here.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (12/10/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    No more claims. no more extra expectations. no more empty abilities.
    i have a special feeling to the verse: build a dream of castle. it is written so nicely.
    you are a talented gifted poet.
    i enjoyed this work so much. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,009 Points Kee Thampi (12/8/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    My dearest poetess again writes.........
    Wishing you all the best,
    on your beautiful come back
    To build a dream of castles.
    Once again in this beautiful planet dear! (Report) Reply

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