Geetha Jayakumar

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No More Claims! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

A promise of word she keeps,
As she made to you long back dear,

The time had come to put a full stop here.
One path ends here as
The board read the warning sign there.
So now,
No more trespassing will be done,
As she noted it down long back.

No more claim on this path
As it does not belongs to her dear.
This path for her ends here.

With a deep pain she wish to tell,
No more claims further ahead.
Reverting back to her next path thereby,

Wishing you all the best,
on your beautiful come back
To build a dream of castles.
Once again in this beautiful planet dear!

Today nothing is left in her hands,
With an empty hands….
All she can pray for you and tell.....
God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !


Dec 3,2013.

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Geetha Jayakumar.

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Comments about No More Claims! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (1/18/2015 11:27:00 AM)

    Nice emotional poem with great message of conviction and courage........Geetha........amazing write.......10 (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (9/15/2014 5:44:00 AM)

    Today nothing is left in her hands,
    With an empty hands….
    All she can pray for you and tell.....
    God bless you dear with all my heart! ! !
    A poem giving a message of firm determination. (Report) Reply

  • Anish Chouhan Anish Chouhan (1/8/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    Today nothing is left in her hands,
    With an empty hands…. superb (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla Tirupathi Chandrupatla (12/11/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    With empty hands….
    All she can pray for you
    Wishing well at the end. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul Wahab Abdul (12/11/2013 9:16:00 AM)

    congratulations! this became a hot poem from India.. kudos.. (Report) Reply

  • V S (12/10/2013 8:09:00 PM)

    what is the use of building the dreams of castles in the planet, when one can build a beautiful shrine in their hearts to greet the friends and loved one? and the only path we need is, pure love..
    Anyway thank you for sharing your thoughts here.. (Report) Reply

  • Soumita Sarkar Soumita Sarkar (12/10/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    a good stroke of pen.......... (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. Ellias Anderson Jr. (12/10/2013 4:22:00 AM)

    No more claims. no more extra expectations. no more empty abilities.
    i have a special feeling to the verse: build a dream of castle. it is written so nicely.
    you are a talented gifted poet.
    i enjoyed this work so much. (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo Dee Corpolongo (12/8/2013 3:21:00 PM)

    A positive poem well enjoyed. Thank you! (and for your comments!) (Report) Reply

  • Kee Thampi (12/8/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    My dearest poetess again writes.........
    Wishing you all the best,
    on your beautiful come back
    To build a dream of castles.
    Once again in this beautiful planet dear! (Report) Reply

  • Rubab Atwal (12/8/2013 2:36:00 AM)

    An excellent poem, really enjoyed it..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 8, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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