Amitava Sur

(20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

One more day is again a past


One more day is again a past:
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The sun by setting, begetting the dusk -
Says one more day is again a past.
Do not know exactly –
Who has gained or who lost,
But for sure – you‘ve advanced –
A day more towards the end.

Before the sun is set
It emanates a light - golden red.
With the last light as twilight –
Everything was looking so bright.

It compels me to think myself
That before my end in this earth–
Will I also be looking so bright –
As the twilight shows the end.

The sun by setting, begetting the dusk -
Says one more day is again a past.
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Amit ava (21.10.2013)

Submitted: Monday, October 21, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013

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  • Roseann Shawiak (5/16/2014 5:53:00 PM)

    As the sun sets it lights the world before lying upon the horizon in it's past.
    And the following sunrise says arise it was not your last. Hoping my end
    is as bright as the sunrise as I look one last time upon my final horizon.
    This poem has great meaning to me, thank you Amitava. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (10/26/2013 6:12:00 AM)

    Life is full of sunrises and sunsets where people are born into this world and die. Its the bit in between that matter, how we live our lives. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (10/23/2013 7:02:00 AM)

    A very good poem Amitava you are very creative and
    artistic. Life is full of sunrises and sunsets. Let us
    enjoy all these wonders of the universe for one day
    the sun will set forever. Just beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (10/22/2013 1:26:00 AM)

    Let us hope that our twilight years will be crimson gold like the brilliance of the setting sun! A good write! (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (10/21/2013 10:10:00 PM)

    Beautiful flow, with well crafting poem..i love each detail and curling thoughts, it is artistic expression here..it again one second that past us...but one second to combines seconds and build min of memories sooner_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (10/21/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    Awesome! A reservoir of penning words that can clearly shows your talent! Just remember my dear friend, the day is not past until it has ended! Once the day has ended, only memories remain behind and become something to talk about! Well crafted and thought provoking my dear friend! 10+++ Please, keep enriching the Poetry World with more of your amazing writes and don't forget to enhance your writing abilities by reading other poets works and comment! Where you are right now, I was and where I am, you will be one day! God Bless You! Regards from New York City www.romeodellavalle.com (Report) Reply

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