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Painting Dove With White Wings

Drops of the rain
Wont erase my reflection on the water
When water find calm, i could see me again
Drops of my tears
Cant erase you from me
When heart calms, i found you in me again
Sometimes we are challenged by time
Still also time knows how to heal

Wear my heart to your mind
Understand more as you can find
Travel deep within me
Way to insight my inside
Use emotions to color the vision
As thought sometimes a colorblind
Here heart and mind be one to define

Drops of the blood
Wont give reflection a life on that water
When things gone, reflection died again
Drops of your tears
Cant erase pain from eyes
With my fingers that care, wiping cry
Sometimes we failed the lesson
We'll fail again until the reason learned

Wide in the limitless sky
All secrets written by the ink of wind
All secrets aren't hiding just invisible
But all the feelings lie on my heart only
Falling tears that leaving from me
May shake my reflection on the water
But when the surface is calming soon
I'll see my face be smiling again
For my eyes, fingers will wipe
For me, heart will be cared

So I paint a dove in me with white color
Spirit to fly and wisdom to be free
A write of my lesson in the sky now is there
Words all aren't hiding just live invisible
To read uncertainty life need a magic
See it by mind with emotional colors
In a book of mine and everybody's secrecy
We may know to go high
We all at low sometimes
So we look upon the height to climb
Life renewed when we start to relearn
And let dove in us try to fly again
With painted white wings

Submitted: Sunday, October 27, 2013
Edited: Saturday, November 02, 2013


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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Everyone has hard things to learn
Just reflection never be us
We must learn what we have to
When no one could understand
We should stand for self
Life, dont let it be wasted
With free dove spirit in us
DO learn the height and we will fly
When someone need hands, hold! we shall be strong togetherness

Just a thought to free me from sticking to the ground
Because a dove in me wanted to touch the highest place in the sky
And share what i write there to remind about what we should remember
_Unwritten Soul

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  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (12/4/2013 9:51:00 AM)

    beautiful and touchy
    every lines so alive
    really love it
    great one
    thanks for sharing

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  • Bri Edwards (11/23/2013 8:49:00 PM)

    simple simile.. from your bio....simple similes i may not know, but simple smiles i will show.

    speaking of smiles........i especially enjoyed:

    Falling tears that leaving from me
    May shake my reflection on the water
    But when the surface is calming soon
    I'll see my face be smiling again
    For my eyes, fingers will wipe
    For me, heart will be cared ....but did you mean to write cared or cured? maybe cared for?

    and i liked the flower arrangement you drew on your poet's page....i can almost smell them now!
    thanks for sharing. :) bri

  • Geetha Jayakumar (11/21/2013 4:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines. Your write is really amazing. I loved all the stanzas...

  • Kavya . (11/19/2013 12:40:00 AM)

    Excellent lines! ! ! !
    Drops of the rain
    Wont erase my reflection on the water
    When water find calm, i could see me again
    Drops of my tears
    Cant erase you from me
    When heart calms, i found you in me again

  • Lyn Paul (11/12/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    Just the emotion in everyword that you write Soul is truly amazing. A very talented young man you are.

  • Dinesh Nair (11/10/2013 9:57:00 AM)

    A good account of things that require many mouths to speak... A fine tribute to all including yourself dear Soul...

  • Valerie Dohren (11/4/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    The white dove symbolises peace, something we all strive for. A lovely poem Soul.

  • Alec Latha (11/4/2013 2:59:00 AM)

    loving the painting of the thinking dancer

  • Valsa George (11/4/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    Finding oneself... finding the extent to which one can fly is the greatest knowledge. You wish to soar into the world like a dove on wings! A dove symbolizes peace. When you are at peace with yourself, you have achieved bliss.
    A wonderful opening to the poem... enjoyed the first three lines the most!

  • Abdulla Al-hemaidy (11/2/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    Wonder! a lovely masterpiece. I read it three times. I would love to read it again.

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