Geetha Jayakumar

Silver Star - 7,536 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Patriotic Song!


Let us sing our patriotic song,
With all enthusiasm,
With proud.

Let's hope when,
We sing the same song next year,
Our enthusiasm and
Our proud for our nation
Have taken a leap!
At least one step ahead!

Jai Hind!



©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014
© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.

Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014
Edited: Saturday, November 01, 2014

Topic of this poem: patriotic


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  • Gold Star - 21,256 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (8/26/2014 10:02:00 AM)

    A good patriotic song which is specially important in independence day of India. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,138 Points Piyush Dey (8/26/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    a patriotic song, yes, let's a step forward each year. nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,554 Points Dinesh Nair (8/20/2014 8:37:00 AM)

    India re remembered and a hope revived! A timely poem indeed Geetha. Sorry for reading late... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (8/20/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    lets hope we could do something for our motherland, , , (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,110 Points Tony Adah (8/19/2014 4:28:00 PM)

    Real patriotic leap! Good rendition. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,384 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/19/2014 3:18:00 PM)

    A nice patriotic song, happy independence day. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,475 Points Salini Nair (8/17/2014 4:56:00 AM)

    lets make our land a heaven....................... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,022 Points Unwritten Soul (8/17/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    Happy independence day india (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 659 Points V P Mahur (8/16/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    Dear Poet,
    What a lovely and sweet feel you have expressed. Thanks for you encouraging comments on my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,684 Points Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji for your so many comments against my poem. Really I feel much humbled before you. Your each and every writes are excellent and outstanding. Wish you all the best. Here in this poem, you have expressed your beautiful emotion which is short and sweet. Regards ever for you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,684 Points Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji for your so many comments against my poem. Really I feel much humbled before you. Your each and every writes are excellent and outstanding. Wish you all the best. Here in this poem, you have expressed your beautiful emotion which is short and sweet. Regards ever for you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 532 Points Silvi Tripathy (8/16/2014 12:57:00 AM)

    May god bless allof us to happen the same with us. Jai hindd. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,104 Points Valsa George (8/15/2014 11:02:00 PM)

    As we advance in years of independence, a forward and not a retrograde movement is expected! If so we can see our national flag flying proudly aloft, next time we celebrate our independence day! A timely write! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,668 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/15/2014 10:43:00 PM)

    Happy Independence Day. Nice reminder to progress by next year. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (8/15/2014 10:18:00 PM)

    Jai Hind! Let us sing together the song of patriotism. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 7,260 Points Neela Nath (8/15/2014 10:18:00 PM)

    Jai Hind! Let us sing together the song of patriotism. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/15/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    Happy independence day ma'am, and what a way to wish this day to everyone we see it we feel and we need it, i always feel proud whenever i read you words they are not words they are spells that keep us readers captivated
    brilliant piece indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,253 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/15/2014 12:45:00 PM)

    Yes we should all sing this song on this auspicious day of independence........Geetha..........with all enthusiasm and patriotism..........thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,192 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/15/2014 12:41:00 PM)

    one step you are really, thanks, (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,621 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/15/2014 11:31:00 AM)

    Thanks for this poem Happy Independence day..we must sing the P song for ever Long live our Independence Day (Report) Reply

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