Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 9,023 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

Patriotic Song! - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Let us sing our patriotic song,
With all enthusiasm,
With proud.

Let's hope when,
We sing the same song next year,
Our enthusiasm and
Our proud for our nation
Have taken a leap!
At least one step ahead!

Jai Hind!



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© 2014.

Geetha Jayakumar.


Comments about Patriotic Song! by Geetha Jayakumar

  • Gold Star - 30,591 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (8/26/2014 10:02:00 AM)

    A good patriotic song which is specially important in independence day of India. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,251 Points Piyush Dey (8/26/2014 1:24:00 AM)

    a patriotic song, yes, let's a step forward each year. nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,733 Points Dinesh Nair (8/20/2014 8:37:00 AM)

    India re remembered and a hope revived! A timely poem indeed Geetha. Sorry for reading late... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (8/20/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    lets hope we could do something for our motherland, , , (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,047 Points Tony Adah (8/19/2014 4:28:00 PM)

    Real patriotic leap! Good rendition. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,000 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/19/2014 3:18:00 PM)

    A nice patriotic song, happy independence day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,674 Points Salini Nair (8/17/2014 4:56:00 AM)

    lets make our land a heaven....................... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (8/17/2014 12:59:00 AM)

    Happy independence day india (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 781 Points V P Mahur (8/16/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    Dear Poet,
    What a lovely and sweet feel you have expressed. Thanks for you encouraging comments on my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,664 Points Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji for your so many comments against my poem. Really I feel much humbled before you. Your each and every writes are excellent and outstanding. Wish you all the best. Here in this poem, you have expressed your beautiful emotion which is short and sweet. Regards ever for you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,664 Points Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji for your so many comments against my poem. Really I feel much humbled before you. Your each and every writes are excellent and outstanding. Wish you all the best. Here in this poem, you have expressed your beautiful emotion which is short and sweet. Regards ever for you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 553 Points Silvi Tripathy (8/16/2014 12:57:00 AM)

    May god bless allof us to happen the same with us. Jai hindd. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,150 Points Valsa George (8/15/2014 11:02:00 PM)

    As we advance in years of independence, a forward and not a retrograde movement is expected! If so we can see our national flag flying proudly aloft, next time we celebrate our independence day! A timely write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,800 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/15/2014 10:43:00 PM)

    Happy Independence Day. Nice reminder to progress by next year. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (8/15/2014 10:18:00 PM)

    Jai Hind! Let us sing together the song of patriotism. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (8/15/2014 10:18:00 PM)

    Jai Hind! Let us sing together the song of patriotism. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/15/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    Happy independence day ma'am, and what a way to wish this day to everyone we see it we feel and we need it, i always feel proud whenever i read you words they are not words they are spells that keep us readers captivated
    brilliant piece indeed (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,665 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/15/2014 12:45:00 PM)

    Yes we should all sing this song on this auspicious day of independence........Geetha..........with all enthusiasm and patriotism..........thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/15/2014 12:41:00 PM)

    one step you are really, thanks, (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (8/15/2014 11:31:00 AM)

    Thanks for this poem Happy Independence day..we must sing the P song for ever Long live our Independence Day (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 1, 2014


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