Treasure Island

Geetha Jayakumar

(Kerala Palakkad)

Patriotic Song!


Let us sing our patriotic song,
With all enthusiasm,
With proud.

Let's hope when,
We sing the same song next year,
Our enthusiasm and
Our proud for our nation
Have taken a leap!
At least one step ahead!

Jai Hind!

ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY GEETHA JAYAKUMAR 2014

Submitted: Friday, August 15, 2014
Edited: Friday, August 15, 2014

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  • Dinesh Nair (8/20/2014 8:37:00 AM)

    India re remembered and a hope revived! A timely poem indeed Geetha. Sorry for reading late... (Report) Reply

  • V P Mahur (8/16/2014 10:51:00 AM)

    Dear Poet,
    What a lovely and sweet feel you have expressed. Thanks for you encouraging comments on my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji for your so many comments against my poem. Really I feel much humbled before you. Your each and every writes are excellent and outstanding. Wish you all the best. Here in this poem, you have expressed your beautiful emotion which is short and sweet. Regards ever for you. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (8/16/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    Thank you so much Geethaji for your so many comments against my poem. Really I feel much humbled before you. Your each and every writes are excellent and outstanding. Wish you all the best. Here in this poem, you have expressed your beautiful emotion which is short and sweet. Regards ever for you. (Report) Reply

  • Valsa George (8/15/2014 11:02:00 PM)

    As we advance in years of independence, a forward and not a retrograde movement is expected! If so we can see our national flag flying proudly aloft, next time we celebrate our independence day! A timely write! (Report) Reply

  • Payal Parande (8/15/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    Happy independence day ma'am, and what a way to wish this day to everyone we see it we feel and we need it, i always feel proud whenever i read you words they are not words they are spells that keep us readers captivated
    brilliant piece indeed (Report) Reply

  • Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/15/2014 12:45:00 PM)

    Yes we should all sing this song on this auspicious day of independence........Geetha..........with all enthusiasm and patriotism..........thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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