Peaceful >>> Poem by Manonton Dalan

Peaceful >>>

Rating: 5.0


oh! I see how cruel
your mouth could be
could it be to food
could be to my ear
I let your mumbles
rattles through air
I sleep on it, sleep

when I awaken I started
to gain distance from you
you become danger to me
I should stay away; far
you never did search
so it's good all for us

Tuesday, January 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: looping
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 07 January 2016

It's good to distance oneself from negativity. I sleep on it..that's beautiful expression.

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 January 2016

Simple and to the point. Loved the emotion in it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 05 January 2016

Sentiments expressed in down to earth manner but in poetic and enjoyable style. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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