Silence
Thoughtful, thoughtless seed,
Listen to the present
Breath
Just agreed,
A warm light
Cast a spell
Spirits rise,
Wisdom 'awake'
Permanent Peace
Arise
OM, Persian Nightingale good to hear from you! Your poem is the seed of the present that agree and breathe permanent Peace. Thanks for sharing....
I love this poem...it is like a breeze of fresh air.Great write!
Interesting, the minimalistic approach; poignant the appeal for peace
yes dear poet. i too think the same. we are living in calculations... in seconds, past, or future, living in dreams or plans. we r not here in life, in breath, or actually not always. if it is true, it is breath that is suffering alone? v should live our breath... and the POEM... I feel, the short lines and messages are near to a silence. For the reader, it must to read between the line, see what the PAUSE is. Or, it is also possible that i cant approch your theme n thoughts, but i tried and i like this poem. Peace...
Swimming in the sea of spiritualistic silence!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
ethereal... beautiful...