Pleasant Journey Poem by Rekha Mandagere

Pleasant Journey

Rating: 5.0


PLEASANT JOURNEY
I like to fly
High, very high
Right to the Utmost Top
Where, rests endless blue pop
On which only angels smile
And dances to the heavenly harp
Forbidden from the noisy rest
Eternal bliss welcomes me
To enjoy the serene silence at best
But I wish only to see
The height of the heaven’s full moon!

I like to swim
Low, very low
To the ocean’s deepest point
And is forbidden from terrible tides
There, rests a bed of precious coral reds
And a heap of worldly wealth willfully smiles
The holy water gently kisses
By sprinkling pearls everywhere on my face
Greets me to feast and rule the sea
But I modestly say
Just came to feel the pulse of depth!

Now I deeply desire to meditate
Deep very deep
Below the depth of blue waters
Far away from mad thoughts
To a place which is not a habitat
Should lead me to the gate way
That ensures me peace and solace
From where I can grasp the lace
Of all human miseries arise
And I wish to seek joy and relief
Moving in the path of holy belief!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 08 November 2011

nice poem, enjoyed it. full marks.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 November 2011

anologically written, well written. shan

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Terence George Craddock 11 November 2011

And I wish to seek joy and relief Moving in the path of holy belief! This path is indeed a joy of meditation

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Gordon Tseng 15 November 2011

Great work. I love it! Mine similar to this. Enjoy it. Lying on the Big Blue Lying on the big blue, I float on the summer sea With some lonely pleasure no others can see. Smiling at the clouds which are laughing at me, I wonder what anything else paradise could be. Lying on the big grey, I float on the world sea With some wandering pleasure no others can see. Smiling at the crowds, who are too busy to hear me, I wonder what anything else heaven could be. -from GOD BLESS NOT ONLY AMERICA

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Amit Gunji 15 November 2011

nice one! :) tumba chennagide!

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Dave Walker 07 December 2011

Like this, a really good poem. Great write.

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Hans Vr 30 November 2011

This is a very nice poem, A 10+++ The heights, the depths and meditation covering everything in between, so nice. Very well done.

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 November 2011

It is a pleasant write though the realistic journey will see you in adventures and threats, miseries and losses.You will somehow win when you can manage disasters as something obvious for the price to pay for your goal.Nice feelings depicted in the poem overall..

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Cristina Teodor 29 November 2011

You took the reader on a ' pleasant journey' to discover the 'heaven's full moon' on the height of the sky, or feeling the 'pulse of depth'of ocean, places with' peace and solace' that open a 'path of holy belief'.Beautiful penned and peaceful..Cristina Teodor

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Braja K Sarkar 21 November 2011

I like your deep thoughts of life reflected in your poems.nice reading..Thank you.

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