Proposal Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Proposal

Rating: 3.6


Will thou dine with me?
A question I seek to ask,
Will thou let me be thy fool?
As my heart seeks that task.

Winter stars shall gaze us from above,
And a rainbow in the dark shall emerge with our love,
We shall be floating above the tree's,
As to me thy are the queen.

I could make night into day if thou wish for that,
Or even change gods creation by making thy world flat,
Thou have made my heart so heavy,
That the only art I know now is to envy thy beauty.

Will thou dance with me?
Under the moonlight, Over the lake,
Floating like angels,
All for love sake.

Come with me, Take a stroll in the park,
I shall show thou the gateway to happiness,
Under the cold white marble ark,
We shall vanish with love into nothingness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emma Adamyan 28 December 2009

so romantic poem, a mystic... what abt kissing over the lake? it`s better, try it :)

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Ashwin Satyal 24 November 2009

love da poem amigo! ! ! i adore ur writting skills! ! :)

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Catrina Heart 24 November 2009

great poem, a classic look....of mixed archaic and modern language....nice poem shared! ! !

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