Rose Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Rose

Rating: 5.0


It was love at first sight,
When i saw thee pretty face,
Nature sang songs,
With passion, love and grace.

I looked up to thee,
As if thy were my Juliet,
Although you saw me nothing,
As thee were already playing a duet.

The graceful darkness,
Surrounded me with truth,
It took me into ecstasy,
Although it took its loot.

And there i stand like a ugly rose,
One of its kind giving a dying pose,
leaning down as if thy heart were too heavy,
Exposed to love although the rose was unworthy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell 12 October 2009

You shouldn't give up on her. Love is worth fighting for.

1 0 Reply
Terence Nabbs 17 October 2009

hi eddy my rose has bloomed for 43 short years terry

1 0 Reply
Tracey Wynn 17 October 2009

Very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts well on seeing love at first sight. I give you a 10 for this. Good piece

1 0 Reply
Patrick A. Martin 18 October 2009

Now this is the one I've been waiting for you need to change one you to a thee and there you are.-----BIG 10

1 0 Reply
Nimal Dunuhinga 18 October 2009

It's not the problem of the Rose Eddy, nothing is certain along this sojourn road.

1 0 Reply
Bobert Smithsonian III 28 February 2010

Wonderful, Eddy. I loved it.

1 0 Reply
Anne Unknown 25 February 2010

beautiful.....it made me speechless. it is very poetic and romantic

1 0 Reply
Kali Abyss 01 November 2009

This is beautiful i really like it =)

1 0 Reply
Obinna Eruchie 30 October 2009

It is sweet and cute.

1 0 Reply
Nalathai Vongjalorn 23 October 2009

WOW very nice poem 10++++

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success