It was love at first sight,
When i saw thee pretty face,
Nature sang songs,
With passion, love and grace.
I looked up to thee,
As if thy were my Juliet,
Although you saw me nothing,
As thee were already playing a duet.
The graceful darkness,
Surrounded me with truth,
It took me into ecstasy,
Although it took its loot.
And there i stand like a ugly rose,
One of its kind giving a dying pose,
leaning down as if thy heart were too heavy,
Exposed to love although the rose was unworthy.
Very nice poem, I enjoyed reading it. You expressed your thoughts well on seeing love at first sight. I give you a 10 for this. Good piece
Now this is the one I've been waiting for you need to change one you to a thee and there you are.-----BIG 10
It's not the problem of the Rose Eddy, nothing is certain along this sojourn road.
beautiful.....it made me speechless. it is very poetic and romantic
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
You shouldn't give up on her. Love is worth fighting for.