Sweet Misery Poem by Aditya Mudbhary

Sweet Misery

Rating: 5.0


In a dream of the deepest thoughts of mine,
I could see a lady under the eyes of the stars,
Looking into my eyes as we dine'
In the finest of all love hours.

Her eyes shine like well polished hazel,
And her hair the tone of caramel brown,
The fairness of her beauty made her like a man made angel,
And therefore she wears my precious love crown.

Thy are the reason im livin sweet,
N if u were not to be born,
I wouldn't be out in our world on my feet.

If i were to choose someone over thee,
That day i would wait to see,
As i am traped in the sickness of love,
Oh can u hear me yr love is sweet misery.

Every glance, sight or vision to remember,
All i see is my fair love,
Strugglin to get out of this gold filled tresury,
As i r to young n your love is sweet misery.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
soso Khan 07 October 2009

I really like this poem no joke its become one of my favs

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Gengis Capote 07 October 2009

good sentiment of love, enjoyed your poem...10

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2009

Candid expression of love.... well penned!

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Lynda Robson 09 October 2009

Nice sentiments expressed here Eddy, well done, 10 Lynda x

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Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell 12 October 2009

Beautifully sad about the longing for love :) .

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Robin Machorro 16 November 2010

very beautiful poem and it was well written you are a great poet! :)

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John Kim 16 November 2009

It's beautiful poem. Sweet miserly is good idea.This poem's expressions are wonder and surprise. I give you 10+

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Tiffny Rhodius 10 November 2009

'Every glance, sight or vision to remember, ' Lovely poem!

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Nalathai Vongjalorn 23 October 2009

Another well written poem 10

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Krupa ... 16 October 2009

Beautifully expressed! ! ! !

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