Treasure Island

Dave Alan Walker

(Pudsey, Leeds)

Rising Soul


As I lie sleeping
my soul rises,
rises into the night sky

Watching and waiting
for other souls to come and see
the world as it sleeps

Knowing mankind
as destroyed it

Submitted: Thursday, December 29, 2011

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  • ZuZu Gold (2/19/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    Not sure the end. But i like your thoughts. Rising to a dream. Can a dream be real? (Report) Reply

  • Feza Karaoglan (1/28/2012 4:55:00 AM)

    You might also like my other poem on Hope & Wings of verse..

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/hope-396/ (Report) Reply

  • Jacqui Broad (12/31/2011 2:51:00 AM)

    Teaching the worth of life in this poem. Yes, souls, ghosts can see most probably best the damage of humankind. A wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • (De Va) (12/30/2011 2:34:00 PM)

    I can feel the souls as they traverse the night. Nice write. Blessings. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/30/2011 1:12:00 PM)

    Precious write..love this short piece my nice brother..Good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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