Rising Soul Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Rising Soul

Rating: 4.5


As I lie sleeping
my soul rises,
rises into the night sky

Watching and waiting
for other souls to come and see
the world as it sleeps

Knowing mankind
as destroyed it

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Buxton Shippy 29 December 2011

Provocative and thoughtful...a new way to look at life,

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ZuZu Gold 19 February 2012

Not sure the end. But i like your thoughts. Rising to a dream. Can a dream be real?

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Jacqui Broad 31 December 2011

Teaching the worth of life in this poem. Yes, souls, ghosts can see most probably best the damage of humankind. A wonderful poem.

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(De Va) 30 December 2011

I can feel the souls as they traverse the night. Nice write. Blessings.

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Unwritten Soul 30 December 2011

Precious write..love this short piece my nice brother..Good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul

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Wes Mbanje 30 December 2011

jus a few words with a whole lot of deepth n meaning, i like, i liked it

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