Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,803 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Rising Soul - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As I lie sleeping
my soul rises,
rises into the night sky

Watching and waiting
for other souls to come and see
the world as it sleeps

Knowing mankind
as destroyed it


Comments about Rising Soul by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie ZuZu Gold (2/19/2012 2:54:00 PM)

    Not sure the end. But i like your thoughts. Rising to a dream. Can a dream be real? (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Feza Karaoglan (1/28/2012 4:55:00 AM)

    You might also like my other poem on Hope & Wings of verse..

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/poem/hope-396/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Feza Karaoglan (1/28/2012 4:46:00 AM)

    It touches the heart... congratulations. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (12/31/2011 2:51:00 AM)

    Teaching the worth of life in this poem. Yes, souls, ghosts can see most probably best the damage of humankind. A wonderful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (12/30/2011 2:34:00 PM)

    I can feel the souls as they traverse the night. Nice write. Blessings. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,253 Points Unwritten Soul (12/30/2011 1:12:00 PM)

    Precious write..love this short piece my nice brother..Good write! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wes Mbanje (12/30/2011 2:22:00 AM)

    jus a few words with a whole lot of deepth n meaning, i like, i liked it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Buxton Shippy (12/29/2011 1:04:00 PM)

    Provocative and thoughtful...a new way to look at life, (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 29, 2011



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