Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 4,127 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Rise The People (Bedroom Tax) - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Detonation of a time bomb
just waiting
distribution of retribution
of a lawful kind

The people will rise

Poet's Notes about The Poem

The bedroom tax and the council tax are joining
people together, everybody will be in court soon.
If everyone joins together in court it will be
a giant step to get the stupid bedroom tax where
it belongs, in the bin.

Comments about Rise The People (Bedroom Tax) by Dave Alan Walker

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/22/2013 5:02:00 PM)

    excellent write on a good subject. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (7/20/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    An excellent piece great subject matter (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (7/18/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    Excellent poem...Great thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jesse Ellsbury (7/13/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    Being from the US, I'm not sure of the legislative details, but I think it's a powerful statement of social justice. A hard thing to do in just five lines. Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (7/10/2013 2:03:00 AM)

    a host of people should come forward/ social justice to be implemented....
    good write! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (7/8/2013 10:22:00 AM)

    It's the poll tax in disguise. People power will get rid of it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (7/8/2013 10:21:00 AM)

    It's the poll tax in disguise. People power will get rid of it! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,077 Points Paul Brookes (7/8/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    Very true Dave but we'll never win. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,717 Points David Wood (7/8/2013 5:11:00 AM)

    This reminds me of the peasents revolt in1383 which was crushed by King Richard III, and later, the peasents revolt of 1983 under Queen Maggie Thatcher put down by police trunchions. The peasents are always revolting! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,111 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (7/8/2013 3:31:00 AM)

    Aha timebombs r scary and dis poem speaks of a simmering trouble waitin to boil over! Kudos poet dave. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (7/7/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    Interesting poem, love it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,065 Points Wahab Abdul (7/6/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    a nice poem..and i agree with Ramesh Rai while assessing the poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,266 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/6/2013 7:53:00 PM)

    a great thought Dave, thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (7/6/2013 7:16:00 PM)

    i love your write. a poem of four lines can be explained in 400 pages. i find this quality in your write. a great write indeed. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/6/2013 12:11:00 PM)

    distribution of retribution
    of a lawful kind

    that's what the administrators are doing! great write Dave. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 6, 2013

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