Rise The People (Bedroom Tax) Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Rise The People (Bedroom Tax)

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Detonation of a time bomb
just waiting
distribution of retribution
of a lawful kind

The people will rise

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The bedroom tax and the council tax are joining
people together, everybody will be in court soon.
If everyone joins together in court it will be
a giant step to get the stupid bedroom tax where
it belongs, in the bin.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pradip Chattopadhyay 06 July 2013

distribution of retribution of a lawful kind that's what the administrators are doing! great write Dave.

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Ramesh Rai 06 July 2013

i love your write. a poem of four lines can be explained in 400 pages. i find this quality in your write. a great write indeed.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 July 2013

a great thought Dave, thanks.

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Wahab Abdul 06 July 2013

a nice poem..and i agree with Ramesh Rai while assessing the poem..

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R.j. Wynn 07 July 2013

Interesting poem, love it.

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Heather Wilkins 22 July 2013

excellent write on a good subject.

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Kelvin Owusu 20 July 2013

An excellent piece great subject matter

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 July 2013

Excellent poem...Great thoughts.

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Jesse Ellsbury 13 July 2013

Being from the US, I'm not sure of the legislative details, but I think it's a powerful statement of social justice. A hard thing to do in just five lines. Excellent poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 10 July 2013

a host of people should come forward/ social justice to be implemented.... good write! ! ! !

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