Dave Alan Walker

Silver Star - 3,913 Points (Pudsey, Leeds)

Time Traveling Mind - Poem by Dave Alan Walker

Shape shifting images
of a time traveling mind
flying through the sky
in the blink of an eye

Not knowing
the year or the time
as I travel through
the centuries of my mind

One day I will find
peace of mind


Comments about Time Traveling Mind by Dave Alan Walker

  • Rookie - 10 Points Millie Fraser (1/19/2012 2:34:00 PM)

    really like this, love how it ends with hope (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,319 Points Smoky Hoss (12/26/2011 8:56:00 AM)

    The mystery of living goes on... nice poem Dave! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 607 Points Rekha Mandagere (12/22/2011 5:34:00 AM)

    The two challenging concepts, the time and the human mind is perceived in a spectacular way. Nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Robert Beck (12/21/2011 6:57:00 PM)

    I enjoy your work, I am able to grasp the meaning of words as they flow from
    your mind. So many of the writers can't keep things simple and their poems
    are not always understandable to me, you don't have that problem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yatin yadvansh (12/18/2011 10:58:00 AM)

    well done...... u will find peace.... read my.... miss you...poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Craig Anderson (12/18/2011 10:58:00 AM)

    Wicked last two lines. Put the cherry on the cake for me Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (12/15/2011 6:20:00 PM)

    well written, once again... we walk thru the halls of infinity never knowing the breadth! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (12/15/2011 3:29:00 PM)

    'tis a phenomenal poem by a magnificient write! ! ! ! top marks! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Silentpoet Grl (12/15/2011 3:20:00 AM)

    Fantastic! You are a great poet. I love this one! -the closing line is brilliant- Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 31 Points Jinal Oswal (12/15/2011 3:06:00 AM)

    Wonderful write,
    flying through the sky
    in the blink of an eye

    We travel miles in our thoughts, thinking of our lives, wondering what it would be in future.. how was it in past.. And now we are back in the present wondering whether the peace for which our heart quenches... when and where will we find it? ? I loved this beautiful poem :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 15, 2011



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