Cassandra Jasmine

Rookie - 54 Points (United States of Awesomeness)

Tonight - Poem by Cassandra Jasmine

Tonight, I am all yours.
No matter what, I will love you forever.
Thinking of you,
Your wag is my cue.

Under the moonlight,
We shall dream of sunlight,
Sitting there on the grass,
Nuzzling each other, and letting time pass.

Let the moon wash her soft rays upon us,
Enjoying the soft, swirling mist,
Letting the Wind ripple your fur,
And weave through my brown locks.

As the mockingbird takes up his son,
A faraway clock chimes 'Ding-Dong'.
As dawn slips into day,
You slowly, yet quietly slip away.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

I was suddenly thinking of the word 'tonight', and instantly, I itched to write something in my Poem notebook.

Comments about Tonight by Cassandra Jasmine

  • Rookie - 302 Points Beach Girl (10/29/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    I love this poem Cassandra! I love this verse, 'Let the moon wash her soft rays upon us,
    Enjoying the soft, swirling mist.' Sounds like a peaceful evening with a dear pet. (dog I assume) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (10/16/2013 3:45:00 PM)

    So beutiful sis! ! I give this a 10 too! : D Exellant! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,722 Points Sandra Feldman (10/16/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    Absolutely, true love, endearing and tender (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,892 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/14/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    So sweet! Loved the poem for its softness, its simple, gentle narration. Pure and serene feelings.
    Is the 'you' in the poem your friend Keiko?
    The last stanza is superb, and the last two lines worth repeating:
    'As dawn slips into day,
    You slowly, yet quietly slip away., '
    Simply wonderful,10/10! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 11, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 31, 2013


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