Transformation Poem by Amitava Sur

Transformation

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Transformation
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Then:

Having you in my life, so content was I
I invented a new I, having you in my life
Having you in my life, I was fluttering like butterfly,
Everywhere I found you and I, having you in my life,

You arrived in my house as a glowing golden fly
Lit up my world, with your innate bright light.
Having you in my life, so content was I
Having you in my life, I invented a new I



Now:

Losing you from my life now, I miss you in days and nights
I became a hollow man, losing you from my life.
Losing you from my life now, I am lost within the blue
I am alone and forlorn, losing you from my life.

No color I find in life, now, so trash and tasteless is it!
All the roads are suddenly blocked, mindless I became.
Losing you from my life, I am lost within the blue
Losing you from my life, I am alone and forlorn.
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Amitava (30.8.2014) 6-30 am

Tuesday, September 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 28 September 2014

Gap between then and now brings a new glow in life. no one can avoid this transformation. life flows within these two banks. old values of life is more glittering and reflects the present. May God give you more power and energy to manifest the present.

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Roseann Shawiak 24 September 2014

Having a beautiful love as you had with Rakhee, I can see how content you were then. Now without her you are a lost child, wanting her so badly, yet she has gone from your life, Amitava. Life has been changed for you in a very drastic way, now alone you must find your way into a new normal for yourself alone. A very loving, tender poem, Amitava, my heart continues to go out to you. RoseAnn

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Salini Nair 24 September 2014

loss in life remind us the value of our loss....we will know its value only after loss..................nice sir

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Valsa George 24 September 2014

Yes, losing a loved one makes so much of a difference in life! But wallowing in the mire of painful memories will only make you sink lower and lower..... With all sentiments of love for her still locked in your heart, you can look for pleasant diversions in life! Very moving write!

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2014

Then and now, we loose many things we find many things but loss of a thing of beauty is an unending sorrow. A gratitude and expression of enduring love has made this poem very impressive and heart touching.

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