Why so haste you tangent thirteen,
Tangerine is bitter and still it's green,
Well you are now a fancy fourteen,
Sweetness increased but why so keen,
Welcome to the age of fantastic fifteen,
Now you have seen many things unseen,
Oh! It's you the sweet sixteen,
Still I advise to avoid this preen,
See now grown to a sexy seventeen,
Can't you wait for elegant eighteen?
Welcome boyfriend say goodbye to the teen,
Best of luck you nice nineteen!
This is quite interesting with the Akhtar stamp! ! Tangerine is sour and bitter when it is green! With the onset of puberty, many boys and girls are equally sour and bitter. As they cross the teens, they become mellowed and sweet! Truth veiled in raillery....... Enjoyed much! A 10
Bittersweet stages of teens so beautifully depicted.......wonderful poetry.......10/10
A great social message and this poem is very nice.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
WOW'...................... That is AKhtar Vai - Hitting the bull's eye Friends - that is truly The life's ball game. No doubt on it It's a ten on ten Loved it with only 10.