Two Moons Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Two Moons

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When I see you moon,
A blessing and a boon,
Reflecting light of the sun,
With your showering gun!

Being filtered and transformed,
What a job you performed!
I wonder on filtrates,
I salute to your dates,

When you are in your teens,
Your writ like the deans!
How neat and clean!
Like a girl of sixteen.

You made me lit,
How pleasant is it!
How romantic is now night!
It's magic of moon light!

Where devils have gone?
Where evils have gone?
Oh! Moon your sacrifice,
How kind and nice!

How you manage this magic?
Making heart so static,
And the thoughts that in,
Are free from the sin!

In her eyes my face,
With glace and grace,
Its image was so nice,
I saw twice or thrice.

Then I asked sweet heart,
I wonder on your art,
It has made me what,
That at all I am not.

How it happened so quick!
In the twinkling of your eyes,
From a ditch I arose,
And touched the skies!

She smiled and replied
It's love that makes,
It removes the dirt,
And flaws and fakes.

I keep all of that,
And reflect your charms,
Because I love,
To remain into arms!

Oh! Moon, I now know,
You are in love,
Would have kissed you dear,
Could fly like a dove!

Saturday, August 30, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: moon
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
True love rectifies and makes us neat and clean.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Somanathan Iyer 30 August 2014

Moon and romance always move together! nice depiction of feelings!

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Khalida Bano Ali 30 August 2014

A beauty, a wonderful poem.

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Khalid Saifullah 19 October 2017

What a beautiful poem! .........................................................

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Ramesh Rai 03 September 2014

Ek chand asma pe hai ek mere samane. one moon in the sky and one moon standing in my front. Oh my beloved moon ! you only grace me upon. Thanks so much for share of inspiring thoughts. Regards.

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Valsa George 31 August 2014

Moon has ever enamoured poets and lovers alike! A fine write on the moon! Enjoyed!

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Salini Nair 31 August 2014

love is the base of everything...love may be the charm of moon.....beautiful............

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 August 2014

Moon that minds the mind - astrology say this - nice poem of romance

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