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Allen Steble

(20/04/1987)

(Unforgettable)


Some say the evening sunset
is the most amazing sight
some say it is the prelude
to the calming silence of evening's fall
some say it finishes a perfect day
with the most spectacular array of colour
some say it is unforgettable
you are like that sunset
-Unforgettable!

Some say that the visible stars
on the blanket of twilight
are what make a gorgeous night
some say that even when those stars die
we will see their afterglow
for millions of years to come
some say they know
why they twinkle as an oyster's pearl
some say they are unforgettable
you are like those stars
-Unforgettable!

Some say that the ocean is a mystery
a wide expanse of endless blue
some say its waves carry away all problems
and swallows them into its deep abyss
some say its power is limitless
and its prominent calm is like an angel's kiss
it is truly unforgettable
you are like the ocean

-You are unforgettable!

Submitted: Thursday, September 10, 2009
Edited: Sunday, November 08, 2009

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  • V P Mahur (2/26/2014 1:32:00 AM)

    A true love is always unforgettable. Nice calm of the thoughts is really pacifying in the poem. so nice.
    I invite you to say something about my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (1/13/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    A lovely painting of true love which can never be erased or brushed aside. very nicely elaborated.
    You may read my poem My morning bud of rose (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (11/10/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    Unforgettable tribute to her to melt her soul... funny I have just bought a photo piicture 2 by 1 and1/2 meters and it is the sunset at the beach like your poem stunning and permenent in the lounge...regards (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (6/15/2013 8:08:00 PM)

    Unforgettable Thats What You Are/Nat King Cole.
    Love can make an impression on your heart that
    can't be erased by the hands of time. Nice write. (Report) Reply

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