Allen Steble

Rookie - 0 Points (20/04/1987)

(unforgettable) - Poem by Allen Steble

Some say the evening sunset
is the most amazing sight
some say it is the prelude
to the calming silence of evening's fall
some say it finishes a perfect day
with the most spectacular array of colour
some say it is unforgettable
you are like that sunset
-Unforgettable!

Some say that the visible stars
on the blanket of twilight
are what make a gorgeous night
some say that even when those stars die
we will see their afterglow
for millions of years to come
some say they know
why they twinkle as an oyster's pearl
some say they are unforgettable
you are like those stars
-Unforgettable!

Some say that the ocean is a mystery
a wide expanse of endless blue
some say its waves carry away all problems
and swallows them into its deep abyss
some say its power is limitless
and its prominent calm is like an angel's kiss
it is truly unforgettable
you are like the ocean

-You are unforgettable!


Comments about (unforgettable) by Allen Steble

  • Freshman - 824 Points V P Mahur (2/26/2014 1:32:00 AM)

    A true love is always unforgettable. Nice calm of the thoughts is really pacifying in the poem. so nice.
    I invite you to say something about my poems. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (1/25/2014 9:07:00 PM)

    Very expressive..romance flows in this poetic sentiments. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,536 Points Amitava Sur (1/13/2014 10:06:00 AM)

    A lovely painting of true love which can never be erased or brushed aside. very nicely elaborated.
    You may read my poem My morning bud of rose (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,926 Points Ken E Hall (11/10/2013 7:49:00 PM)

    Unforgettable tribute to her to melt her soul... funny I have just bought a photo piicture 2 by 1 and1/2 meters and it is the sunset at the beach like your poem stunning and permenent in the lounge...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (10/20/2013 11:40:00 PM)

    Beautiful poetry...enlightening! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (8/6/2013 3:04:00 AM)

    Lucky women all I can say...10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (6/18/2013 4:33:00 PM)

    beautiful imagery. a nice write. Enjoyed the read (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (6/15/2013 8:08:00 PM)

    Unforgettable Thats What You Are/Nat King Cole.
    Love can make an impression on your heart that
    can't be erased by the hands of time. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 303 Points Guy Lip-more (5/16/2013 2:15:00 PM)

    Really like your style of writing, very expressive but direct. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Gillena Cox (9/19/2009 7:53:00 AM)

    like the way you pile your case, before your summations (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 10, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, November 8, 2009


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