Vine! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Vineyard stealthily took away a few golden rays Grapes stood blushing on the vine of mays. Canopy of vine fabricated life In a crystalline glass brighten up the path! A fine poem that glows with the sparkle of crystals and Grape Wine.

Wow! I loved the flow of this- - - - - - Dewy days lit by darkness Died away in flames of sunset. That is just about as perfect an image as a writer can write! ! ! ! !

Beautiful depiction on life, nature along with vine and grapes. It has been pictured edifyingly. Let me quote...Canopy of vine fabricated life In a crystalline glass brighten up the path! . Thanks for shsring...10

An excellent poem that draws a beautiful imagery of words! 'Vineyard stealthily took away a few golden rays Grapes stood blushing on the vine of mays.' - Loved these lines.

metaphoric and finely executed. thanks

Dewy days lit by darkness Died away in flames of sunset.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Now that is poetic! ! ! ! Absolutely top-notch painting of a scene from an excellent palette of words. Grapes stood blushing on the vine of mays.- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Yes! ! ! Simply, succinctly, original. A line that will be quick to become a word memory for your readers! ! I am glad you posted this for us to read!

Beautiful poem of imagery.

Path deluge in memories of conceit Still the heart emanated from muddled plight. Vineyard stealthily took away a few golden rays Grapes stood blushing on the vine of Mays. Lovely poem Geetha! Outstanding with beautiful images from Nature and the depth of content and smooth flow! Deserves top marks!