Kranthi Pothineni


Waiting - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Ocean is still and calm
Breeze is cool and warm
Sun is bathing in charm
I sat down gazing it long
To hear my beats song

Sun glowed after its bath
Water too glittered like gold
Waves danced in grace
I sat down admiring that phase
While lighting a smile on face

Clouds came and passed
Sky dressed the ocean skin
Dark shades sailed into sand
I sat down cheering its reach
Like fulfilling a deepest wish

Sun moved away from blue
Slowly its fire too got dull
So it went to rest in peace
I still sat until its too dark
Waiting for morning to break


Comments about Waiting by Kranthi Pothineni

  • Rookie - 166 Points Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (3/3/2010 7:03:00 AM)

    A fabulous nature you presented in imagery galore…
    10+
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie rago rago (11/3/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end.............. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 813 Points Antonio Liao (11/3/2009 3:36:00 AM)

    like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the
    garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such
    a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,963 Points Marieta Maglas (11/2/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature :
    ''Sun glowed after its bath
    Water too glittered like gold
    Waves danced in grace''
    wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 185 Points Anju Addanki (11/1/2009 1:25:00 PM)

    A nice poem where everyone goes through it at one point of time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (10/31/2009 10:24:00 PM)

    a beautiful and touching poem.voted10
    thanx
    surya (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,073 Points Louis Rams (10/31/2009 9:56:00 PM)

    very well done! it keeps you 'waiting' to see the ending. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (10/31/2009 6:52:00 PM)

    Loved you ending lines here.........great piece! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (10/31/2009 11:52:00 AM)

    again a wonderful poem from you. a poem painting a beautiful picture.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Joseph Poewhit (10/31/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    Paints a lonely picture (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (10/31/2009 5:48:00 AM)

    Indeed your trademark..
    this kinds of poem
    Well done 10s... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (10/31/2009 3:26:00 AM)

    Waiting for the sunset and the morning simultaneously is an interesting phenomenon, Kranthi. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (10/31/2009 3:05:00 AM)

    Waiting for the sunset is well narrated here. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/31/2009 12:49:00 AM)

    [waiting] is a multisided connotation/ well set (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Janell Cressman (10/30/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    stunning! ! ! ! ! ! !
    beautiful imagry, loved it! ! ! ! ! ! (10 from me :)) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2009

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 9, 2011


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