Kranthi Pothineni


Waiting


Ocean is still and calm
Breeze is cool and warm
Sun is bathing in charm
I sat down gazing it long
To hear my beats song

Sun glowed after its bath
Water too glittered like gold
Waves danced in grace
I sat down admiring that phase
While lighting a smile on face

Clouds came and passed
Sky dressed the ocean skin
Dark shades sailed into sand
I sat down cheering its reach
Like fulfilling a deepest wish

Sun moved away from blue
Slowly its fire too got dull
So it went to rest in peace
I still sat until its too dark
Waiting for morning to break

Submitted: Friday, October 30, 2009
Edited: Saturday, July 09, 2011

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  • Rookie rago rago (11/3/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    flowing down like a pure stream your words are scintilating.......very nice presentation and crafted till end.............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 724 Points Antonio Liao (11/3/2009 3:36:00 AM)

    like Lilies that float in the hyacinth of sweeten honey; tasteless lips touches the
    garrison of wonderful flowers......Lotus comes in my beautiful reality...such
    a lovely poem with a heart...Thank you and God bless....a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 653 Points Marieta Maglas (11/2/2009 4:00:00 PM)

    nice simile, well embedded into this poem between two visual metaphors, which are used to personify two elements of the nature :
    ''Sun glowed after its bath
    Water too glittered like gold
    Waves danced in grace''
    wonderful descriptive poem about the nature, lovely to read....10++++++++ (Report) Reply

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