Heather Burns


Walk With Me - Poem by Heather Burns

Dear friend

take my hand
walk with me
through the
valley

together

we will reach
the mountain
top just at the
breaking of dawn


Comments about Walk With Me by Heather Burns

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/9/2014 1:05:00 PM)

    Lovely poem..Together, we will reach the mountain top at breaking dawn....Beautiful lines. Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,113 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (8/6/2014 3:29:00 PM)

    A lovely sweet poem!
    Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,246 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/3/2014 6:04:00 PM)

    A beautiful melody written with a flowing rhythm, as we reach the mountain top just as the sun comes up, breaking free from the horizon. Love this poem, Heather, it is short and full of meaning. Thank you, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,829 Points Amitava Sur (7/25/2014 7:39:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem. Together we live , together we can reach the mountain top even. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,575 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (7/23/2014 7:21:00 PM)

    Reach the mountain top together. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,684 Points Bill Cantrell (7/21/2014 2:55:00 PM)

    Nice smooth poem, I enjoyed the walk (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, July 21, 2014



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