Torrents of water
Rocket over the edge to
Drive away its past
nice haiku...reflects your poetic thought of composition & expression..
nice haiku, have a deep meaning inside....haiku reflects poetic thought..great
This is a beautiful haiku, Tiffany, well written and structured. You've done a great job. Enjoyed very much.
Wow! ! Seriously Wow. I love when true art says volumes, with minimal expression. Makes it all the more powerful. Beautiful.
Beautiful image these three short lines create.I have a doubt in the use of the phrase 'rocket over'. pl. verify its usage in a dictionary.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Its vibrant energy slushes up Above the puny rocks below Its roar of magnitude infinity As it hits The minute grains of sands On a tiny island. Oh, what can be compared than to the vastless and bottomless sea? Yet sadly Its beauty is no longer abound It awaits its death around.