We Are Not Lost Yet Poem by Akhtar Jawad

We Are Not Lost Yet

Rating: 5.0


I am a solute,
a heart,
and I have been dissolved
in a solvent,
your love.
The solution has been fermented.
It's a red wine now.
Come on sweetheart,
let us cheer each other,
we are not lost yet
let us share the drink
to become ecstatic
and to remain unaware
of the moment of loss
when we are really lost.

Monday, June 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 06 June 2017

Seems chemistry of love and life.......................

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Nosheen Irfan 06 June 2017

Wowww. very innovative. Enjoyed reading a lot.10

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Chinedu Dike 08 June 2017

Strong emotions expressed in chemistry terms. A wonderful piece of art. Thanks for sharing.

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Meaningful writing. Loved it

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2022

A meaningful poem with a great message to the society. Top score for this thoughtful write.

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Khalid Saifullah 29 July 2018

A beautiful love poem.

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

Living for the moment; regardless of the situation. A lovely way to say it. Thank you sir

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Valsa George 09 June 2017

This is a wonderful way of enjoying life! Though the prime of life is past....let us drink life to the lees!

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