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Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,549 Points (18 October 1964)

Y.. The Cloud


A sublime white cloud
Hanging above the sea
Fluffy and streaky
Transparent and bright
White and blue
Fully abstract
A marvellous sight

That cloud,
So nice.
No ancient Greek,
Nor Michelangelo
Nor Van Gogh, Nor Picasso
Has ever made anything
Of such astonishing beauty

Such a sublime piece of art
Sculpted, painted,
By the Ultimate Master
Of all Sculptors, painters

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Submitted: Tuesday, August 23, 2011
Edited: Thursday, March 28, 2013

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  • Freshman - 1,053 Points Elena Sandu (10/28/2011 7:47:00 AM)

    Yes! A thousand times yes! True! No human hand can continually spread layer after layer of unique beauty as our Mother Nature does. We can try to keep a memory of it by making copies more or less acurate but we can never Create real pure beauty, one after another.. Not in this time and space. Altough I shall contradict myself again and ask: planting a tree couldn't be a creation? A baby's smile is it not a beauty? A flower? We could give such beauty one after another, could we? Please pardon my bubbling there are times that I need to show how ingnorant I am. Lol, as like it is not very obvious.. See what your amaisingly good poem does, messing with my soul or mind and I think it will stick with me for a while.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Maia Padua (10/24/2011 6:15:00 AM)

    The wisdom of God will always amaze us..
    and you have successfully laid your concept to us...
    you and your have wonderful ideas...nice thoughts
    keep on sharing... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Richard McClellan (10/21/2011 9:57:00 AM)

    I like this one, you should read my poem 'Nature at Its' Best' that I posted for my great aunt Jewell Partee... Its similar in nature... (Report) Reply

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