An ominous, gloomy cloud
Of anger, frustration and shout
It darkens our sky, it’s getting loud
It’s about to thunder and rain out.
But there deep in our hearts
There is a whisper that starts
It is a whisper of unconditional love
Perhaps coming from high above
What will happen, ‘ll fully depend
on what we listen to more in the end
To the thunder, shall we give in?
Or will we let the soft whisper win?
The world smiles as we smile with it. The universal concept, LOVE is always enchanting man. Love in its unconditional form is the greatest love on this earth. Very nice expression as always: -)
But there deep in our hearts There is a whisper that starts It is a whisper of unconditional love Perhaps coming from high above /the whisper of unconditional love/ love to read your poems... I feel the Fragrance of Innocence in your poems! ! ! ! !
Let us hope that soft whisper wins. A great analogy of mankinds basic thinking-Brief and well done
Beautiful poem having a deep meaning, thank you for sharing
good poem for whispering in the air or about love, about many things we image. thumb up
A pertinent question.... Though the rumble of thunder is deadening and the whisper of love is so soft, no doubt love will win at the end! A very sweet and meaningful poem! !
Beautiful and thoughtful write. A whisper of love sounds wonderful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Let the whisper from our inner, from self even it is not from others..It just not only a whisper but wake up from the dream, that we rise from the darkness to walk into a real life scene..with courage our skin and vision across the light beam, we will win..we will win! _Soul