Your behavior has hurt me so much
My mind has exploded like a supernova
The scattered emotions are turning into poetry
Revolving around you my star like planets and comets
Your beauty has impressed me so much
My love has turned into something like a nebula
That is giving birth to lust's light like newborn stars
Your make-believe has made me believe
That true love really exists in this dreary world
And gives me light in the darkness like distant quasars
Every now and then the fights with you
Has turned you into something like a black hole
Now you are invisible to me but attract me ever more
You are like a sweet dream in the dreadful night
But it will not come true in this life coz you are like an alien
In the 2.5 million light-years away from earth Andromeda galaxy
nice work asif.... You are like a sweet dream in the dreadful night But it will not come true in this life coz you are like an alien In the 2.5 million light-years away from earth Andromeda galaxy i really love these lines... »so close«
This is out of this world Asif! Love it! We are doing about the life cycle of stars in class at the mo! A good analogy about out of reach love! Thanks for the heads up!
Spontaneous parameters as words are observed to swing giving readers the zing thing of poetry
Great imagery so visual full of deep emotions, great write!
Wonderfully creative! Liked how you used the elements of astronomy in your declaration of love. Thanks.
awsome! ! ! cuz it was really something different! ! ! ! good job! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An alien beauty became a joy for ever.Not always though but sometimes yes and taking the positive into assumption its a nicely penned one.Very exquisite write Sir