Heartbeat Poem by Unwritten Soul

Heartbeat

Rating: 4.3


[Sound Effect: Breathing and sigh]

Everytime i take a breathe
There's something i can't explain
How the vibes bid, hit in this vein
Each beat speaks to me
Synchronize with love
Be one, in the heartbeat

[Sound Effect: Dub Dub Dub (Heart beat) 3x]

Whispering me very clear....[whispering]
As loud as you can hear
J'adore..

[chorus]
Listen to My heart is beating love
The Art of heartbeats singing loud
The victory of vibes can't be slowing now
'Mi amor por ti parasiempre' our spanish vow...
Everyone bold ' Te queiro' raise to atmosphere
Just catch the beats march on the dance-floor
Need catch my breathe need some air...

To breathe...
The beats..
And love..
As One..

In my body waves keep pulsating out
From my heart it striking beating hard
Pulses controlling with dubbing love
Need some air, don't have enough
The sound quiet bit rough
Can't defeat the beat, cant rid or stop it

[Chorus]
Listen to My heart is beating love
Pumping heart strongly bursting it loud
That's alright, let's make tonight sound warmer
The feeling just going deeper louder heavier...
'Un amour pour toi' our french love tour
Twist the waist move it on the victory floor
Voice of Vibration free fill in the air...
I just want to breathe

Our breathes...
Pace beats..
With love..
Be One..

L.O.V.E., pulsating center ALL of US
Wrapped in the chest, United in the heartbeats
Staring each other eyes PEACE shining out
Running my vein, pulses speak it out
'Habeebi, Ahubkum Jami'a',
I burst it out tonight
Only tell it loud and i cant hide
Faster, pounding and haunting

Stand for love tonight, pace won't stop
Don't you listen the beats from me?
Nation of love, vibration to get free..
Kill the love, then the heartbeat stop

Be United as one
Breathe.Beat.Love.Free.Us

[Sound Effect: Heartbeat sound-echoes fade out]

: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : Theme: Love for all, universal love: : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : : You North or south, west or east we speak one language love...The best French...j'adore, tequeiro my spanish friends, and you my habeebi and all words to be love..be united, Indian, chinese, arab, white, black, whatever you are, remember peace is love...say it loud and it united in by heart :)

Breathe, send oxygen for life....and heartbeat make us alive
Heartbeat=love and beat
Beat=Passion
Love=peace
.: heart beat=love with peace, passion in beats
Heart beat

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence George Craddock 15 February 2011

'I burst it out tonight Only tell it loud and i cant hide Faster, pounding and haunting Stand for love tonight, pace won't stop Don't you listen the beats from me? Nation of love, vibration to get free.. Kill the love, then the heartbeat stop Be United as one Breathe.Beat.Love.Free.Us' Dance Freedom In Every Heartbeat if we cannot dance with love and freedom in our hearts for all then we cannot hear the rhythm of love written into all beauty that remains in our heart beat world that remains in beautiful gentle souls that remains in gift love softly sung that remains in God’s original gift vision for created humanity all souls dancing to sacred rhythm life are previous unique hearts bliss wonder all dancers smile laugh breathe love Inspired by the poem ‘Heartbeat’ by Unwritten Soul. Copyright © Terence George Craddock

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Unwritten Soul 30 March 2011

I Being honored by another two precious gems, but the comments have been deleted by the system so i 'eternalize' that shiny comments to keep bouncing light in heartbeat frame :) Rekha Mandagere- Tq for her ruby shine by sending me: You are wonderfully creating the concept of LOVE in the mind of readers. I saw Alfred Tennyson''S movement in your poetry! Great. Terence George Craddock, I enjoyed your emerald green poem :) he wrote me 'Dance Freedom In Every Heartbeat', if u like to read it, can check in his page -Unwritten Soul

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Rekha Mandagere 09 July 2011

Very beautiful. Made it very soothing with the effects, rhymes, narration technique and deep love for humanity.Moreover heartbeat is a life activity. Life process is fused with great feelings. I give full 10 marks. :)

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Stefanie Fontker 21 September 2011

Love is beautiful, and fantastically expressed in this poem. I love your vision of love, haha, great writing once more here.

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Dave Walker 27 September 2011

Like it my friend. Very good. Do you sing it, have you Sung it.? And yes my sands of time poem is the One i told you about.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 April 2018

You have speculated the oneness of universe through love which relates to peace and heartbeat. The way of presentation is unique and amazing. I quote..... Our breathes... Pace beats.. With love.. Be One.. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Rebecca Navarre 08 September 2017

Amazing Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! ! ! Striking! ! ! ! ! Beauty, Love, Peace, Heart Beats! ! ! ! ! ! Excellent Beat And Tone! ! ! ! ! With Heart And Wisdom Shown! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! + Wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Tom Allport 22 August 2017

a lovely rhythmic poem that should join with every living heartbeat? .........superbly written US.

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 May 2016

Pounding and haunting! Nice piece of work.

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Frank James Davis 23 April 2013

Such poetic passion! Could not help but thoroughly enjoy this clever, original piece.

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