aryaindia india

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aryaindia india Poems

121. * Touching 12/11/2009
122. Within The Soul 10/17/2009
123. I Saw You 3/1/2009
124. Light In The Future 4/28/2009
125. When Death Came Calling 4/22/2009
126. Belief 4/26/2009
127. Expression 10/21/2008
128. Kaleidoscope 1/30/2009
129. Joy And Peace 1/31/2009
130. #where Is The Shine? 1/22/2010
131. Aged Beauty 10/17/2009
132. Darkness 11/12/2008

Comments about aryaindia india

  • Subroto Chatterjee (4/16/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    Madam,
    Your comment on my poem ('Twas Not A Rose) was 'The doubt in the first verse gradually lifts and there is conviction in the last four lines that is very finely expressed. There is alternate rhyming in the first verse, then couplet rhyming in the second, the third verse has classic verse rhyming and the last verse passes off well though the rhyming scheme is odd. Very cleverly done! There is a hard thought that is softened by the sweetness of the words chosen and there is softness too that is hardened by the sharpness of the pen that is clever too. Good luck and god bless, regards, aryaindia.'

    I'm still recovering from this delicious onslaught! ! !
    Your inputs are very much appreciated. Onward ho!
    Cheers & God bless.
    Subroto

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Best Poem of aryaindia india

Kaleidoscope

Spilled are the flashy colors unlimited
Gleaming in their light of shining frenzy
Their hues ranging from dark to light pearl
As they sweep deliriously in the mind
As the memory of your smile twinkles within

Quivering in their metallic lustre
They catch the ray of the midday sun
Frivolously streaming in sheer delight
The touch of purity truly unblemished
As the dew drops on leaves dazzle the morn

The morning's look after the kiss of dawn
Ravishes the longings of the night
Like the naked mind that is thirsty
Quenched by the fire of unmatched ...

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Kaleidoscope

Spilled are the flashy colors unlimited
Gleaming in their light of shining frenzy
Their hues ranging from dark to light pearl
As they sweep deliriously in the mind
As the memory of your smile twinkles within

Quivering in their metallic lustre
They catch the ray of the midday sun
Frivolously streaming in sheer delight

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