Crystal Self

Rookie (02/18/1982 / Greenwood, South Carolina)

Crystal Self Poems

1. Reflections Of Mistrust 8/15/2005
2. Leave 8/15/2005
3. Untitled 8/15/2005
4. Feelings Of Loss 8/14/2005

Comments about Crystal Self

  • Anne Leaver (8/15/2005 5:04:00 PM)

    Hi Crystal
    Just keep writing. You have the emotional quality to cut into the meat of life.The task then, is to find the images that create the taste of your emotions, thoughts, beliefs. A marvelous exercise is to wrote through one sense at a time. Like, what does solitude smell like, anyhow? How does mistrust feel to the skin, the touch, and so on. I can't wait to find what you come up with.

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Best Poem of Crystal Self

Feelings Of Loss

Instantly life flashes through my mind,
It is raining, but there's not a cloud in the sky.
Succumbed by emotion,
Reality grabs my nervous system,
Like a vampire's thrusting canines,
Everything that was common is somehow misplaced,
Hiding in a dark room,
Extracting all the love inside me,
Like a needle to the vein,
As I surrender to the devastion,
My heart explodes with envy,
For the life that is now only in my dreams,
Dazed as I go through the daily routines of life,
Surreal as it all seems,
This is my reality,
With not a tear left to ...

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