David Floren

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  • Aaron Eliad (2/8/2008 11:11:00 PM)

    I've read most of your poems, and I think they're pretty damn clever. Keep writing them.

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Best Poem of David Floren

Line Break Liner Notes

Our lives, our souls – they're
Actually down here,

Renown: in stasis, until
Hard line breaks
Birth it.

It's hearth, it's basis:
Down here birthed.
From stasis.

You’ll never know until you
(Enter verb here) . Always,
Your soul

Sports gossamer wings. Actually
They aren't. Here they're
goose down-

Wrapped peak-baggers
Debating the true worth
of height.

Here births there. Enter.
We’re down

(Enter noun here) . Then posit
Something Dynamic.

You’re ...

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Modest Watershed

Modest watershed, these days
People haven’t yet begun
Foraging for drink.

Think yourself self-storage?
Think yourself mere curtilage
Where cobwebs sag abandoned?

Where stand your thin walls,