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Dolan Doran
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Dolan Doran Poems
- Abuse laying in bed, half in, half out... the dream realm ...
- Just Breathe Looking in your eyes a dark brown, with a hint ...
- One Night Stand laying here, thinking. how good would it ...
- Inside The Truth. talking to you. listening to them. No ...
- Hush Little One we sat down that day, in the warm sun, on ...
- Passion Passion, Love, Emotions wild, heat Sweat, ...
- Hope Hope. The demon of my dreams. The pain in my ...
Reflecting the emotions behind the eyes of a teenage girl who fights love, drugs, emotional roller coasters, and life in all aspects. more »
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Abuse
laying in bed,
half in, half out...
the dream realm just
out of my reach.
my window open,
the darkness encroaching
slowly;
I try to encourage the
non-existent
breeze to wipe away
my tears.
laying naked,
feeling used.
the bruisese darkening
on my chest and side.
How can your “love” hurt so much?
How can you dare call this love?
Why did you do this?
Why do I let you?
Finally sleep takes me
away; pain fades;
a minor throb in the
back of my mind.
No more pain.
No more fear.
It’s over. ...
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Hiiyer Dolan,
Your name in itself is poetry to me! I'm in no position to comment, but you thinking that you’re 'not that good' is ridiculous, I would kill to have half the talent you do. Your style is electric, fluid and gripping. Your words are so real, and draw the reader into your life. And without being patronising at all, to do all that at your minimal age is nothing short of stunning. Let the poetry be your excavation.
Keep doing what you do best, you’re an inspiration! :) X x x
Bilal.
Hi Dolan,
For being a 16 years old girl, your mind is aging faster than your body.Your writes reflect your extreme maturity in knowing the complexity of life particularly the component of it which is 'love'.I adore your love poems.As a teenager, to be loved by someone is a whole new experience to you, but the way you carry the weight of love is beyond comparison and it shows in your poetry.You keep on goin gal cuz I always believe you could hit the ' market ' before you reach full blown adult! ! !
Best wishes,
Brett.