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The serenity of nature fills my soul with peace
As I lay back on the crisp, yet soft grass
I let my mind wander to a tranquil state
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Here in my quiet place
All is calm
All is peaceful
All is serene
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I think it's sad when people think poetry
Is their favorite rapper's new song
When gay can't mean happy
When childhood friends fight
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I had the dream last night
A woman of pure beauty appears before
And we share in love's delight
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Who can it be, this new mc
Who goes by the name of poetic p
Whose rhymes go hard, and lyrics go harder
Who claims he's better than the famed Mr Carter
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