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Excuse me for my bad poem. It's my first. I like to promote my poems with your friendly advices. Thank you dear.
An eagle flied over sky a day
And arranged his wing to run a way
In order to perform to do a game
He should do the game as may again
As opened his wing and saw a Par (Persian form of feather)
As stayed on top forgot the past
As opened his wing and firm Par
As stayed upwards cosmos down
The sky made him proud of fly
Fly made some time for eagle to say
As stays top and as stays down
As stays ...