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Warren Falcón 25 September 2012

Refreshing to read these poems on this site. If only all were required to read, In Judging 424 Hungry Poems, He Comes To Understand The Term 'Obvious Dog'! ! ! one of the bestest titles ever. Am going over my own zoomitositous poems to amend, rather, in 12 step fashion, MAKE AMENDS, guided the Ten Step Program in your poem. I would add a First Step: I admit that I am helpless over gratuitous commas. Keep going til Ooohaohma allows some restful sleep. Warren Falcon

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