Nothing is Wrong
All is right
Reality is far
Barely in sight
...
Dawns earliest light giving me the fear I've been waiting for
Soon it would be when...
I look at the spot on the map, seen so many times by my sore eyes
Soon it would be where...
...
Old pebble, dirt road
How many people have trodden
Upon your sturdy ground
How many lives
...
I recently discovered a liking for poetry and am attempting my hand at it. I know I have very far to go, so any comments would be really helpful. I'm 15, so my vocabulary and ideas can only go so far. Thanks for taking the time to read my poems. If you do read them, please review to tell me what you thought. It doesn't have to be long or detailed.)
The Innocence Of Summer
Nothing is Wrong
All is right
Reality is far
Barely in sight
I can't see the sadness
Despair and fear
I felt so deeply
The rest of the year
I am perfectly myself
Happy with me
Secure where I am
Happy to be
Yes I live for the summer
Free from all worry
I'm so sad that it ends
In such a great hurry