Mother, you carried me for 9 months,
You're brilliant brown eyes were open
when mine was dim light
You wrapped me carefully in your soft arms
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Iam not a professional writer, I just want to share my poem that I made in honor for my mom, I will accept any comments, criticism, compliments on my work.Iam open minded and I believe criticism is the key of learning.)
A Poem To My Mother
Mother, you carried me for 9 months,
You're brilliant brown eyes were open
when mine was dim light
You wrapped me carefully in your soft arms
and sing lullaby,
You feed me when I was hungry,
Worried when I cry.
You guide me when I took a wrong path,
Told me to strive when I right,
Scolded me when I sneak,
Comfort me when I freak,
Teach me to rise and arise,
You cannot imagine the sunrise,
when I got applause.
But the times I was revealed,
I am sorry, I learned
While I was away I remembered,
What a wonderful! mother that I have.
Mother, when you was weak,
I wanted to care you,
Feed you when your hungry
Dress you up, walk with you,
Just like you care when I was raw,
But I was faraway.
Mother you left, remain memories,
Memories like no other can replace.