As the sands of time fall away
Like the leaves on an autumn tree
To a place where redemption meets soul everyday
And grants the thoughts of thee
...
Stranger with the bright blue eyes
who claims to be my friend,
how often that you lie to me
your heart I cannot mend
...
The clouds float on by
And they float on by for you
Sometimes wispy cirrus
The clouds float on by
...
Please take me there, to the city of wind,
A palace were the mind can wonder
Where clouds are daily dealings with your dreams
As above us they merrily dance
...
I'm not much of a poet- I like to write stories instead, but in my creative writing class, we're in out 'Poetry Unit' and my teacher is making us sign up in a petry website so we can get TRUE, HONEST feeback about our poems. So...lay it on me, my fellow poets! I'm ready for it!)
A Summer's Sonnet
As the sands of time fall away
Like the leaves on an autumn tree
To a place where redemption meets soul everyday
And grants the thoughts of thee
To leave oneself to the games of fate
As the sun breaks over the dawn
The confides of what is to hate
And washes the summer gone
The icy depth of winter’s hold
The tremor of winter’s eyes
Shiver from a shameful cold
The result of a thousand lies
Alas, as summer again makes it through the day
It pulls the curtains of winter away
oh you noeveryone is jelous of your poetry! ! ! specialy me! !