Comments about Laurie Flynn
To commit- to do with no withdrawal.
This is it, you have chosen it.
Commit a murder- one cannot be revived.
Commit to a marriage- eternal bond of love.
Committed to the act of ending it all,
Marry the ground in a public proclamation
Of your love- or self hatred- after falling
Among the stars which hid in the depths of
The endlessly black winter nights.
Take one last breath,
Towering, quivering, above the stone cold
Ground. That will be you too soon-
Frozen in time; hard and grey.
The earth has cracked you, but ...