Alone - Amazing poem but consider (to make it flow more and be easier to read)
whereas in the first stanza every line ends in me, you could try that with all the other stanza's.
eg: happy faces, smiling faces, lying faces
just a suggestion hunn xxxx
Hiya', I was just reading through your poems, they're amazing. You're really good. I can realte to a lot of what you write, I've seen or felt a lot of it myself. ALONE was my favourite out of all the one's I read.
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