i like the line 'i'm a work in progress'
not because i'm still under construcion,
but because i take constructive criticism.
so give me your opinion,
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The only thing that I regurgitated was confusion when I had to think about it,
Killing their son and in birth a creature of no familiar to mankind.
Not only this is unfair to them but to the Real me, to that inner voice that never abandons me, but ma emotions are a bundle that has been abandoned, since my motives are to take away the soul of a child a mother has given life to.
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