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I am trying to write an English poem, but I don't know how. If this 'poem' is not a poem, can someone help me to comment on how to improve to make it more like a poem. Thanks.
This poem is about a girl I met in college but we never ends up together. I just want to ask her for forgiveness for my mistakes in the past and marry me.
I don't know where to start this letter
to make thing between us a little better
for you always told me to be friend forever
and that always give me a 'Leky' fever
I can't recall ...