बेहतर नही हु
बेहतर बनना चाहता हु ।
अच्छा नही हु
अच्छा बनना चाहता हु ।
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Lovely poem, dear. You need to write more.And move away from the patterned "singable" poems. If you have some grasp on Urdu, you can try gazzals. Read more. Try reading right from Kaalidasa.
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